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Author: mikehoffms

microsoft-edge/web-platform/sidebar.md

@@ -5,11 +5,11 @@ author: MSEdgeTeam
 ms.author: msedgedevrel
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.prod: microsoft-edge
-ms.date: 07/24/2023
+ms.date: 08/04/2023
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 # Develop for the sidebar
 
-The sidebar in Microsoft Edge is a persistent pane located on the side of the browser, which coexists with the primary content of the browser. The sidebar allows users to easily access popular websites and utilities alongside their browser tabs. The content in the sidebar augments the user's primary task by enabling side-by-side browsing and minimizing the need to switch contexts between browser tabs. With the sidebar in Microsoft Edge, users can access the productivity tools they need while staying in their workflow.
+The sidebar in Microsoft Edge is a persistent pane located on the side of the browser, which coexists with the primary content of the browser. The sidebar allows users to easily access popular websites and utilities alongside their browser tabs. The content in the sidebar augments the user's primary task by enabling side-by-side browsing and minimizing the need to switch contexts between browser tabs. By using the sidebar in Microsoft Edge, users can access the productivity tools they need while staying in their workflow.
 
 ![The sidebar in Microsoft Edge, showing useful tools, alongside the main tab](./sidebar-images/sidebar.png)
 
@@ -24,9 +24,9 @@ As a developer, you can leverage the sidebar for your own experiences in two way
 
 The two different ways in which you can leverage the sidebar are designed to meet different developer needs. The following are the key differences between sidebar apps and sidebar extensions:
 
-|Approach | Sidebar app | Sidebar extension |
+| Aspect | Sidebar app | Sidebar extension |
 |---|---|---|
-| Definition | A Progressive Web App (PWA) that runs in the sidebar. | A Microsoft Edge extension that displays content in the sidebar. |
+| Term definition | A Progressive Web App (PWA) that runs in the sidebar. | A Microsoft Edge extension that displays content in the sidebar. |
 | Distribution | Like a website, the app is hosted on the app's web server. | The extension is distributed through the [Microsoft Edge Add-ons website](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/Microsoft-Edge-Extensions-Home). |
 | Capabilities | The app can make use of all web APIs and features, as well as PWA capabilities such as offline support, push, or file system access. | The extension can make use of powerful extension APIs, such as reading or modifying the current page. |
 | Context | The app runs in its own web context, separate from the main tab. | The extension can access the current webpage and modify the webpage via the extension's content script. |
@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@ The two different ways in which you can leverage the sidebar are designed to mee
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 ## Sidebar apps
 
-Sidebar apps allow you to adapt your existing Progressive Web App (PWA) to securely run alongside other browser tabs for a side-by-side co-browsing experience, which is a great choice for web developers who want to offer companion experiences including social, messaging, or media apps that don't require advanced extensions capabilities.
+Sidebar apps allow you to adapt your existing Progressive Web App (PWA) to securely run alongside other browser tabs for a side-by-side co-browsing experience. This approach is a great choice for web developers who want to offer companion experiences including social, messaging, or media apps that don't require advanced extensions capabilities.
 
-The sidebar app infrastructure helps users discover and install sidebar apps as they browse the web, providing great discoverability for your app with just a simple change to your web application manifest file. Sidebar apps are a great option if you want to reuse your existing web app for the sidebar in Microsoft Edge and make full use of the web capabilities that are available to PWAs.
+The sidebar app infrastructure helps users discover and install sidebar apps as they browse the web, providing great discoverability for your app just by making a simple change to your web application manifest file. Sidebar apps are a great option if you want to reuse your existing web app for the sidebar in Microsoft Edge and make full use of the web capabilities that are available to PWAs.
 
 To learn more about PWAs and how to create them, see [Overview of Progressive Web Apps (PWAs)](../progressive-web-apps-chromium/index.md). And to learn more about adapting your existing PWA to the sidebar in Microsoft Edge, see [Build PWAs for the sidebar in Microsoft Edge](../progressive-web-apps-chromium/how-to/sidebar.md).
 
@@ -50,7 +50,6 @@ To learn more about PWAs and how to create them, see [Overview of Progressive We
 
 Microsoft Edge extensions can optionally use the sidebar API to show a custom UI in the sidebar in Microsoft Edge. This is in addition to the other places extensions also appear in, such as in the Microsoft Edge toolbar, or as popups.
 
-If your experience relies on powerful extensions APIs, for example to read or modify the current page, then a sidebar extension provides these capabilities. Users can find and install these extensions through the [Microsoft Edge Add-ons website](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/Microsoft-Edge-Extensions-Home). The Microsoft Edge team continues to evolve these sidebar extensibility models and welcomes your feedback. To leave feedback, [create a new issue](https://github.com/MicrosoftEdge/MSEdgeExplainers/issues/new/) on the repo or [search for existing issues](https://github.com/MicrosoftEdge/MSEdgeExplainers/issues) and join existing conversations.
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+If your app's experience relies on powerful extensions APIs, for example to read or modify the current page, then a sidebar extension provides these capabilities. Users can find and install these extensions through the [Microsoft Edge Add-ons website](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/Microsoft-Edge-Extensions-Home). The Microsoft Edge team continues to evolve these sidebar extensibility models and welcomes your feedback. To leave feedback, [create a new issue](https://github.com/MicrosoftEdge/MSEdgeExplainers/issues/new/) on the repo, or [search for existing issues](https://github.com/MicrosoftEdge/MSEdgeExplainers/issues) and join existing conversations.
 
 To learn more about Microsoft Edge extensions and how to create them, see [Overview of Microsoft Edge extensions](../extensions-chromium/index.md). And to learn more about using the sidebar API in your extension, see [Extensions in the Microsoft Edge sidebar](../extensions-chromium/developer-guide/sidebar.md).